Tuesday, January 23, 2018

Death Comments

Rating: 5.0

He gasped with desperation
for air, but no despair there,
nothing more can be done or said.
more an automatic response,
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Chinedu Dike 05 February 2018

A sorrowful tale of loved one's exit into eternity expertly narrated in a brilliant poem. A well texted and nicely thought-out piece. You're very talented. Thanks for sharing

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