Wednesday, August 20, 2008

Death. Comments

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Cold, icey fingers,
Pierce the greyness you claim is skin,
As you take your last few breaths,
In and out,
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Dyllan Martin
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Cassandra Chai 20 August 2008

A Very True Poem About Death. Described Well And Correctly. Well Done! Good Luck And Keep On Writing! =D -Cassandra

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Dyllan Martin

Dyllan Martin

Bournmouth, England
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