Sunday, November 15, 2015

Death Came To My House Comments

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Death came to my house
And painted my house black with sorrow
Puncturing at the core of my family
My dad had to be the sacrificial lamb
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Kenneth Maswabi
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Shakil Ahmed 15 November 2015

a heart rending poem on the death of your beloved father, but you have painted the poem with bear\utiful images and it presents your heartfelt passions very well, thanks for sharing, brother, if you find time please read some of my poems and leave your comments thanks, - i share your grief.

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Kenneth Maswabi

Kenneth Maswabi

Maun, Botswana
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