Wednesday, May 6, 2015

Death - Counting The Cost Comments

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We spoke together quietly one afternoon of his son now lost
I came to realise as he spoke of his struggling with its cost
His son was young and just starting with his own life's journey
What happened made him question if as a father he was worthy
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Paul Warren
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Tia Attwood 14 February 2016

great poem that everyone should considr before drink driving recklessly, my mother at nineteen was with friends, one of her friends was driving the car, young drunk and reckless and all 4 of her friends died, she was the only servivor and had troubles walking throughout the rest of her life. another guy where i live now. same age 19 went rallying with his mate, his mate died, he servived, he could walk fine but had lost most of his cognitive abilities. it's prety sad. great job regards Tia

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 07 August 2015

So sad but amazingly presented this true story.

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