Death - Counting The Cost Poem by Paul Warren

Death - Counting The Cost

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We spoke together quietly one afternoon of his son now lost
I came to realise as he spoke of his struggling with its cost
His son was young and just starting with his own life's journey
What happened made him question if as a father he was worthy
His son was one night partying making mistakes which cost his life
Drinking, madly driving and not wearing a belt was his list of strife
Lost control of the car rolled over onto to him halfway out of the door
His life was squashed from him and his story became no more.

As we spoke together I could see the strain in his half-closed eyes
At his quiet times now the thoughts of his only son back to him flies
If he'd worn the belt, not drunk or driven would it have ended in that way?
His son would be with him together and for the future he would stay
It had been a year past since it happened and his mind became at ease
Until his son's birthday dawned and his thoughts then turned for him to grieve
How do I tell the world about it who haven't listened to his saddened tale
The need to drive safely together and not experience a tale in grief's unkindly wail!
© Paul Warren Poetry

Wednesday, May 6, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: social comment
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is a true story. The father was grieving a son lost in circumstances which could have been avoided. I look at the way some driving is portrayed - of famous people taken in similar circumstances and shake my head. The road isn't a playground - it is deadly serious. Each day the father pays the cost - the son's birthday came and he realised that he would never see him again. The funeral was with a large crowd - these things usually are when someone young dies (he was 19 yrs old) . The family have a portrait painted of the mother by the son in pride of place as you walk into the house. Please share this story.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tia Attwood 14 February 2016

great poem that everyone should considr before drink driving recklessly, my mother at nineteen was with friends, one of her friends was driving the car, young drunk and reckless and all 4 of her friends died, she was the only servivor and had troubles walking throughout the rest of her life. another guy where i live now. same age 19 went rallying with his mate, his mate died, he servived, he could walk fine but had lost most of his cognitive abilities. it's prety sad. great job regards Tia

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 07 August 2015

So sad but amazingly presented this true story.

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