Saturday, May 19, 2018

Death, Dust-Faced Coalman Tanka Comments

Rating: 5.0

Death
a dust-faced coalman
unfolding
one body bag, then another...
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Chen-ou Liu
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Kevin Patrick 19 May 2018

grim, but well worded, the horrifying realities of war are truly conveyed. Fantastic poem!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 May 2018

This Tanka is definitely super tanka that reminds us about expression...10

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