Friday, May 8, 2009
Death Falls Upon A Wondering Soul Comments
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As death falls upon my soul
The tears I've cried begin to take their toll
Where I am heading the dirt is dark as coal
It is hard everyday to keep my self control
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Deva De Silva
08 May 2009
I felt that here your soul searching only touches the surface of sadness... like many poems I've read...go deeper... find that place which describes your pain and zoom on it... that would make your poem unique...
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2/21/2026 11:22:33 AM # 1.0.0
certainly a lover will kiss u.........the day is very near......... a beautiful write.