Shalom Freedman

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Death Is The Ultimate Disappointment - Poem by Shalom Freedman

The final good- bye
The leaving alone
Those one does not wish to leave alone-
Death is the ultimate failure
The letting down of one's loved ones
One cannot help-
Death is the Sadness at the end of it all
And the hurt one gives
To those one least wants to hurt-
Death is the ultimate no- good
Sad as it is
It is possible to hate it.

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  • (2/10/2013 10:39:00 PM)


    Why do we live and, why do we die? There really seems to be no reason, why?
    So true, the futil emptiness of death. Beautiful poem in it's sadness
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 10, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, February 11, 2013


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