Kill or Be killed

Rookie (8/14/92 / Pittsburgh)

Death Rattle - Poem by Kill or Be killed

I wanna feel it,
I wanna forget about it,
I wanna forget hearing my mom talk about it,

When my dad died she said she felt it,
When my dad died I swear I did too,
When my dad died it was more like an earthquake,

When my family died there was a rattle,
When the old me died there was an rattle,
When everything comes to an end there'll be a rattle.


Comments about Death Rattle by Kill or Be killed

  • Norma Southwood (11/28/2008 11:47:00 PM)

    KOBK, when it all comes to an end, there'll be more than a rattle!
    When my Dad died, there was an earthquake too, and I still feel the aftershocks.
    I like your poems.
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 8, 2008



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