Saturday, December 19, 2015

Death's Final Breath Comments

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In the cold embrace of night,
The stars in the sky, were such a sight.
As the darkness turns to night,
The warm and the cold were in a constant fight.
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David Forrester
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Melissa Patty 19 December 2015

Wow this poem completely touched my heart. I'm sorry to hear about yor mum. Reading this really spring a chord for me as I know exactly what you've gone through. When I was 12 years old my mum died of lung Cancer.To lose her at such a young age is heartbreaking.And poetry has my biggest escape from this.Poetry has helped me express my feelings.I'm glad that poetry was your comfort too.Thankyou for sharing this poem and sharing your emotions.I hope things start to pick up for you, in my prayers..God Bless.

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David Forrester 20 December 2015

thanks for the comment and i'm really sorry to hear about your mum, hope your life is starting to get back on track now and as I said I wrote this to help me through it all and It really did help god bless you too

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Manonton Dalan 19 December 2015

great rhymes..... thanks

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