Wednesday, November 16, 2011

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So serene was seemed the mo
Amidst the white of the frozen sea of clouds,
A bitter joy of loneliness for company
I wander the path of
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John Raubenheimer 16 November 2011

I like the line 'A bitter joy of loneliness for company'. It tells me how you really feel and it's plain-speaking - I mean it's how a person speaks today. It isn't a cliche.

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