Saturday, December 19, 2015

Deception Comments

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She pretended love him like nobody before
The deception started first time she walked through the door
He loved her so purely she was the one of his dreams
The both expressed true love and all that it means
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Chinedu Dike 23 January 2016

An insightful depiction of waywardness and deception in the bliss of love, well articulated and nicely penned in good rhyme scheme with conviction. A lovely poem bristling with knowledge. Thanks for sharing poet. Please read my poem THE OBSESSIVE AGONY OF LUST.

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