Monday, June 26, 2017

Deception Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

She has beautiful skin
With the body of a model
Every ounce of her love
I got drunk off the bottle
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King Godbolt
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Unwritten Soul 15 August 2017

I think you wrote this poem with very subtle, clever and unique way as your own style. This sounds beautiful but it also has dark meaning. Nice work

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Jazib Kamalvi 25 July 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Godbolt. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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