Saturday, August 29, 2015

Decide Upon Something Comments

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At first decide upon something
Then act accordingly

Decide upon something
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Aniket Nikhade
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Roseann Shawiak 03 September 2015

A very good idea of ways to make decisions in life, excellent message! May I make a suggestion? Try to eliminate unnecessarily repeating the same idea constantly, try to combine words into terse and succinct verses. (i.e. - 'At first decide upon something, then act accordingly. Once figured out then all thinking must pause. When a line of action is clear and all doubts are sorted out, then take the first step') . Other than that, I absolutely love your poetry and it's messages. You have great potential. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Chinedu Dike 02 September 2015

A good depiction of the power of decision, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Aniket.

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Aniket Nikhade 02 September 2015

Thank you so much for reading my poem and appreciating my work. I agree that there was a lot of conviction that was required before getting everything in it's proper place. Thank you so much.

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