Defeated Poem by Maryah DeLong

Defeated

Rating: 2.5


Bring me down just one more time
crush my every dream
forget the things that were once mine
burn my self esteem

Thursday, May 1, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: dream
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Desantis 05 May 2008

whoa...heavy Maryah, but potent. A strong poem about the pain of a lack of self-esteem. I liked it, cheer up though!

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