Wednesday, June 22, 2011

Depraved Child Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was entangled through the chains of punishment
Which I believe do not deserve
Father battered me with lethal weapons
Bled from the mouths I mourned
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 22 June 2011

Great poem. Written well with vivid imagery. Nice sentiments. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Akmal

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