Wednesday, April 22, 2015

Depression Comments

Rating: 4.5

Depression
My most noticeable expression
I don’t know what it’s caused by
Maybe it’s because people lie
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Brandon Bretsnyder
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Chinedu Dike 22 April 2015

Lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and written in reconciliatory tone, expressing heartfelt apology for previous bad attitudes displayed with sincere heart to make amends and compensate for them. I like the rhyme scheme of the piece. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Brandon Bretsnyder 23 April 2015

Thank you so much! You have made my day.

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Kelly Kurt 22 April 2015

Lovely poem, Brandon. Thanks for sharing

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