Wednesday, August 6, 2014

Deserted Dew Comments

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Lost desert was it then
Rain never comes its way
Lonely nights swathe her sighs
Lord spill a shower one day
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SALINI NAIR
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Geetha Jayakumar 07 August 2014

Beautiful poem Salini. Beautiful lines... Love someday fetches in silence We sow dreams on its lap But one day it will say adieu In that flood we will sink! ! ! ! Very true said, Not sure when the dream we sow will say good bye and surely will make sink in flood too... I loved it.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 06 August 2014

Yes love is like a deserted dew.......it springs, momentary it lives and dies like sinews.......very well composed

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