Destiny: Coma And Crashes Poem by pssive w nker

Destiny: Coma And Crashes

Rating: 5.0


Destiny watched
safely trapped high
in coma’s vantage point
whilst Streetwise
continued to wash Gullible in heavy tears

stripping genuine from mordant
allowing dissemination to pile
in mounds open as deleterious
stagnant waste susceptible
to wounds of reaction

Time remained...
monitored through beeps…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 27 January 2009

The mystery of unconsciousness - especially that of intensive care. This one reminded me of last year's looking glass world of monitors and tubes and uncertainty. Love the way you have dealt with your Streetwise and Gullible. A powerful piece. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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