Devistation Touched Dead (Fostercare My Thoughts About Being Taken Away) Poem by Amber Zenisek

Devistation Touched Dead (Fostercare My Thoughts About Being Taken Away)

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my soul commerce me,
chamber of death,
is all I see,
wish it would disapear,
and never return,
suffering death,
condeming me, feeding off me,
all this hate in me,
please condem me!

Friday, January 12, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chad Fisher 22 January 2007

I agree with Sam. You have great talent indeed.

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Sam Finley 19 January 2007

Hmm, a bit complicated, but it means something alright. When life gets you down, it can be pretty crappy. As I said before you have talent, just like the many around who also writes poetry. You have a gothic feel to your writing, very dark. I like your style. I'll write about anything.

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