lorissa cowan

Rookie (31/10/1990 / mackay)

Did He Really Care? - Poem by lorissa cowan

I’m standing here,
As the world goes by,
My eyes are red and puffy,
From the tears I shield,

I whisper your name,
Into the sky it was dark and grey,
I look out…
The waves were dark and welcoming,

I walked towards the ocean,
Breathing in the sea air,
As the waves take me under,
I’m feeling free,

As the waves take,
Me deep within them,
I think back to where,
We once were,

And ask myself……. Did he really care?


Comments about Did He Really Care? by lorissa cowan

  • (4/21/2008 7:15:00 PM)


    Very well expressed and with a deep feel of lost love and the circumstances which usually follow it...... So sorry, but you write so beautifull.....

    Bonnie
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  • (4/21/2008 6:51:00 PM)


    awwwww.....just gawjusss....
    hope things start looking up for you baby
    :)
    i really do
    :)
    Kaila
    ox.
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 16, 2008



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