Did He Really Care? Poem by lorissa cowan

Did He Really Care?

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I’m standing here,
As the world goes by,
My eyes are red and puffy,
From the tears I shield,

I whisper your name,
Into the sky it was dark and grey,
I look out…
The waves were dark and welcoming,

I walked towards the ocean,
Breathing in the sea air,
As the waves take me under,
I’m feeling free,

As the waves take,
Me deep within them,
I think back to where,
We once were,

And ask myself……. Did he really care?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bonnie Collins 21 April 2008

Very well expressed and with a deep feel of lost love and the circumstances which usually follow it...... So sorry, but you write so beautifull..... Bonnie

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awwwww.....just gawjusss.... hope things start looking up for you baby :) i really do :) Kaila ox.

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