Did I Leave A Mark? Poem by TMA

Did I Leave A Mark?

Rating: 5.0


I came into your life-
You invited me,
Or I elbowed my way in
Or fate threw us together-
Nevertheless, I entered…
But did I leave a mark?

I came into your heart-
You let me in,
Or I pestered you
Till you finally opened up-
Nevertheless, I entered…
But did I make a mark?

I came into your mind-
You let me in,
Or I pestered you
Till you could think of little else-
Nevertheless, I entered…
But did I leave a mark?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
majid Alsaady 29 October 2010

the question u insisted on asking is quite convencing.the technique u used is promising and encouraging for the start of a brilliant poet. thanks for sharingdear poet

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Bethany Buhl 25 February 2011

I wonder that to some of the time.

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Courtney Steele 07 November 2010

I love this this poem it is discussing wheter you entered into something voluntarily or involuntarily which doesn't matter but did I make a difference or change is what will always be important ;)

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Mark Louie Cañete 04 November 2010

Your poem is superb.It gives inspiration! ! ! !

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Empress Ina Spirit Mavuso 01 November 2010

Greetings......lovely work, I love the piece. short, to the point but makes you wonder, yet makes you smile. beautiful.

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Bert Bell 30 October 2010

A lovely, refreshing idea that you have expressed very well poetically. Very nice indeed.10/10

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