Did I Lost U? Poem by moon light

Did I Lost U?

Rating: 4.5


It seems like yesterday
but nearly 10 months ago
i still remember
the smile on yr face
in the camp

since then i love u
i gave u hints
but u ignore it
although u know it

i was crazy..
within these days
i cried
i smiled
i sad and depress
all cos of u
u tourture me so long

i wish i ve u
i wish u r mine.
but u still remember that ex.girl
past is past
let it past

I wish u will b here
To hug me...
but..it is jus a dream..
i love u...
i dun wanna lose u...

i wish i will c u....
although u finish poly
i hope still that u will b in camp again..
love ya..
Aye

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tony Fiona 26 April 2007

very good emotion nice write unique use of the English language. I enjoy it Tony

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