moon light


Crazy.. - Poem by moon light

i think i m crazy
cos i miss u
though i try not to

cos i wait your msg
insted i know u wont read mine

cos i cant dropp a tear
while my heart is full of pain

cos i cant stop thinking of u
even u treat me bad

i m crazy
cos of u BABY...

wish time would pass by
fluently....

cos i cant breathe
whenever i saw u
with that girl!

wish my pain is over
sooner....


Comments about Crazy.. by moon light

  • Moon light (12/26/2006 9:11:00 AM)

    O well. kelly..
    thanks u so much
    for real i m jus for fun and jus to shout out my feeling
    :) more i still learning and jus love poems but trying to write onli
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  • Kelly marie Berry (12/26/2006 8:44:00 AM)

    it ok but a bit more thought would work. i had that problem with mine so i hope you take what i telling you and work on it as a poet said to me no one poem is truely ever done not even if you fell it your best.
    take care
    kelly
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 26, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, December 16, 2010


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