I Miss U Poem by moon light

I Miss U

Rating: 5.0


I remember what u likes to eat
when i m eating sth

I remember your gesture
when i see sb who acts like u

I remember what u likes to read
when i go to bookshops

I remember how u laughs
when my friends say jokes

I now afraid
u will refuse me
cos my love is attached
with my pride

Praying to the God
to make u love me

But now
i really miss u
so much that i cant
figure it with words

pls dun love to other girls
wish your love b soon mine



PS: i know my writing is really bad... but... i wanna write :)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tears Of Sorrow 25 April 2007

It's not that bad, psh, I spell worst then you, I really like this poem too. And don't worry about your spelling, not everyone is good at the, I get F's on spelling test....that's because the words are soooooooo long! I can't even say them! much less remembre them. sigh, well; .; With love T.O.S.

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Brittany Hill 18 September 2006

Your writing will get better don't worry, I still understood your message. Good Job.

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