moon light


I Miss U - Poem by moon light

I remember what u likes to eat
when i m eating sth

I remember your gesture
when i see sb who acts like u

I remember what u likes to read
when i go to bookshops

I remember how u laughs
when my friends say jokes

I now afraid
u will refuse me
cos my love is attached
with my pride

Praying to the God
to make u love me

But now
i really miss u
so much that i cant
figure it with words

pls dun love to other girls
wish your love b soon mine



PS: i know my writing is really bad... but... i wanna write :)


Comments about I Miss U by moon light

  • (4/25/2007 8:08:00 AM)

    It's not that bad, psh, I spell worst then you, I really like this poem too. And don't worry about your spelling, not everyone is good at the, I get F's on spelling test....that's because the words are soooooooo long! I can't even say them! much less remembre them. sigh, well; .;
    With love
    T.O.S.
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  • (9/18/2006 10:30:00 AM)

    Your writing will get better don't worry, I still understood your message. Good Job. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 18, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, September 16, 2010


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