Monday, September 14, 2009

Did I Tell You? Comments

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Did I tell you that my Daddy died?
They said 6 months...
We didn't think he knew
He thought we didn't, because we didn't say
...
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Judith Evans
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You have written a beautiful and sensitive poem and the repetition of 'Did I Tell you' works so well to convey your love and the story of his passing. It is great to have you on Poemhunter and keep up the good work! 10 love Karin

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Sue S. 15 September 2009

What a wonderful poem. He was so proud of you - and rightly so!

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Diana Van Den Berg 15 September 2009

This is poignantly beautiful, Judith and whilst I ache for your pain, I am equally envious and happy that you had such a wonderful father and made such perfect memories with him and your family.

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