Friday, January 27, 2006

Dies Irae Comments

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Why did Mozart not complete
his Requiem, left like a wraith?
Could it be that he got cold feet,
and gave up when he lost his faith?
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Hugh Cobb 27 January 2006

Great use of rhyme, Gershon. A very interesting poetic insight and premise. P.S. I know the above are only phrases, but that seems to be the way thought occurs, not always in grammatically perfect sentences. Good poem all around. Hugh

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