choco pie shreyasi

Rookie - 63 Points (30-11-1996 / gwaliour)

Differences - Poem by choco pie shreyasi

have you ever thought
there are many things,
that are not been taught.
that are the differences,
between one and other.

one that gets the pocket money
and the other,
selling something and getting a penny
no difference in people,
but different in feelings they feel,
other getting a penny feels real.
but the one getting pocket money,
even have a feeling to steal.

no difference in people,
but different in there hard-work,
other doing a hard-work,
only gets a penny.
and the one doing nothing,
is being provided with anything.
even then they want something! !

no difference in people,
but different in behavior.
other only getting a penny,
is being very kind and without query.
one getting a pocket money,
is being very rude
and full of queries.

no difference in one and other,
just they are being created,
one's are the best,
as they steal,
as they want everything,
as they are being rude.
others are nothing else!
as they feel happy doing something,
as they do hard-work,
as they are king...
why still differences,
are being mentioned,
that's really difficult to find,
so, it still remains a question?


Comments about Differences by choco pie shreyasi

  • Shreyasi B (6/11/2012 1:27:00 AM)


    thanku so much sharad.....no its not like that i have all seen that around me! ~! this poem came to my mind when one day while goin' to school i saw a boy selling pineapples....and that's the moment when i had this poem in my mind! ! anyway thanku for ur comment..its very rare that i get any comments on my poems in poemhunter.com....thanku! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Sharad Juneja (6/7/2012 1:38:00 AM)


    A nice take...I guess it's what all u have seen around u n u have penned it in the form of poerty..Nice one (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 1, 2012



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