poet Upendra Majhi

Upendra Majhi

Digital Love

Your love hint came in my cell
in sms, as one time password,
I came running and stood still before you,
You said you want Character validity verification
you scanned me with constant gaze and cryptic queries
for five long minutes,
I stood stil that long, donot know how,
then you said your father has
fixed your marriage, but ''no breakdown report ''
nor any excess tear report,
I cancelled in my mind the love transaction
there and then for no more compromise
I wanted in my Love P.I.N and one time password.

Topic(s) of this poem: love and life

Poem Submitted: Monday, August 7, 2017
Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 8, 2017

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Comments about Digital Love by Upendra Majhi

  • Valsa GeorgeValsa George (8/8/2017 1:43:00 AM)

    Now even the communication between lovers has become cyber language. Enjoyed the poem with its sense of humor!

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    Upendra Upm(8/8/2017 5:45:00 AM)

    Thank you Valsa.

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  • Rajnish MangaRajnish Manga (8/7/2017 3:26:00 AM)

    Light hearted humour travels as per the narrative but it seems inappropriate when so much of verification activities have already taken place. Thanks.
    You said you want Character validity verification
    you scanned me with constant gaze and cryptic queries

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    Upendra Upm(8/7/2017 5:18:00 AM)

    Thank you very much for your kind elaborate description Mr. Manga.

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  • Rini ShibuRini Shibu (8/7/2017 3:08:00 AM)

    Sad poem.. Feelings are infused in it

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    Upendra Upm(8/7/2017 3:37:00 AM)

    Thank you Rini.

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