Saturday, April 19, 2014

Disillusioned. Comments

Rating: 5.0

She's the soul of my thoughts,
In front of her my life bows.
From the day I saw her,
It felt- - -we knew each other.
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Honny Zubedi
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Dr Antony Theodore 23 December 2015

She shares my sadness, And she enjoys my happiness. She's the reason that keeps me alive, Otherwise there's nothing to strive. A life for ever. let it become true in your life. best wishes. ! ! thank you. tony

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Akhtar Jawad 11 May 2014

I don't know why whenever I tried to write my comments on this beautiful poem, my comment magically vanishes.

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Akhtar Jawad 10 May 2014

What a poem! Can anyone ignore it? A piece of beauty.

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Captain Herbert Poetry 24 April 2014

smooth flowing like a river, such a pretty poem

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Honny Zubedi

Honny Zubedi

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