Dismissed Poem by Haley Akin

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Rating: 5.0


I have tried so hard
I have really tried to be
Someone who is there
But no one ever sees me
I extend many offers
I put myself out there
Often brushed aside
No one ever seems to care
I say I am done trying
But I know it is not true
I just keep on asking
As if I'll hear something new
I fear that I believe
It is not me they care about
With nowhere to fit in
I have a sinking sense of doubt
I know I have a value
It is sad so many miss
The friendship I could bring
If not so easily dismissed

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 25 June 2011

I really loved the way you described the whole thing. Great poem rich in imagery and style. Rate 10 for your skilful writing. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Regards Akmal

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