Renu shrestha

Dissatisfied - Poem by Renu shrestha


Tranquil n sometime, So quite the days are…
Though its creating violence within …
I m combating with my own desire
Loosing control over myself
Letting born
in me
the biggest dissatisfaction ever…

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  • (6/18/2010 3:20:00 AM)

    Its our heart which makes us feel alone in the crowd and sometimes it makes us feel ourselves as a crowd when we are lonely.
    I fine the same theme in the poem. Good! Go on writing such poems which is not only readable but also praiseworthy and clapworthy. God bless you!
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 10, 2010

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