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Well written verse in easy-to-understand language. I love the message, it conveys! Deanna xx

Great poem Jon you should have called it 'Fear'. You are right as fear stops from having an adventurous life and also a creative one. Wish I knew this when I was your age as it might have made a difference. Thank you for your comments on a 'A Just cause' and a Plea. Your version might work but I feel it would lose its impact. Both poems came from a very long poem I wrote called 'Whispers'. I see you give spiritual guidance, may I ask what kind? You can reply direct if you want my email is: - [email protected]. Looking forward to hearing from you. Regards Bob