Tuesday, March 17, 2015

Division In Me (2015) Comments

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Evil I do but good I want,
All I try turns to dust,
I thought I had given up,
Given up all to you,
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Shade of Dawn
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Hannington Mumo 17 March 2015

Great piece! I can see you have just started - write more for you have the potential.

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Juha-matti Hietala 20 March 2015

Thanks. Actually I have written poems for fewa years now and I have lot of unfinnished and finnished pieces on my computer. These I have shared here are just a fraction really. I appreciate your words and I will continue to write. Sometimes my pomes might have some spelling and grammar errors because I have dyslexia which is quite ironical.

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