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Divorce And A Child - Poem by Ice

In my arms is my creation,
with it's soft body and strong grip,
it sleeps with tender ease.
As I hold my baby girl I feel her breathing,
My oh my how her breath helps me to keep going,
with her tiny hands a wonderful smile,
to her tight grip and peaceful mind.
As i lay her down to rest in her little bed,
I cry for her and me,
for tomorrow my baby girl's mother splits us apart


Comments about Divorce And A Child by Ice

  • Bhavani Polimetla (9/24/2009 2:53:00 PM)

    So much pain....Nice poem. (Report)Reply

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  • J Baker (5/8/2008 12:24:00 AM)

    Hey,
    The sad about this poem is its so true. I have never met a male who will walk for no reason if there a child invloved. You portryed this very well.
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  • Ice (5/8/2008 12:18:00 AM)

    thank you daniel and jared (Report)Reply

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  • Daniel Wheeler (5/1/2008 4:14:00 PM)

    i gave it a 10. it's nice to see a guy's view once in a while. (Report)Reply

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  • Jared Ashby (4/22/2008 4:31:00 PM)

    very touching piece (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 22, 2008



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