Tuesday, April 22, 2008

Divorce And A Child Comments

Rating: 5.0

In my arms is my creation,
with it's soft body and strong grip,
it sleeps with tender ease.
As I hold my baby girl I feel her breathing,
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Bhavani Polimetla 24 September 2009

So much pain....Nice poem.

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J Baker 08 May 2008

Hey, The sad about this poem is its so true. I have never met a male who will walk for no reason if there a child invloved. You portryed this very well.

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Ice 08 May 2008

thank you daniel and jared

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Daniel Wheeler 01 May 2008

i gave it a 10. it's nice to see a guy's view once in a while.

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Jared Ashby 22 April 2008

very touching piece

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