Saturday, October 3, 2009

Do Not Cry, My Little. Comments

Rating: 5.0

I've seen you crying all that long night,
Tears like huge bugs went out from your eyes -
I even do not now reason why. There is allways reasons for
And every day adds more and more.
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Helen Vorst
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Quin Faas 03 October 2009

last line moves...beautiful

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Tai Chi Italy 03 October 2009

I was hooked by this line 'Diffracting on your long lashes, die in deep dark sky.' What a patter? and I don't mean rain! lol I always believe in living in the now! perfectly poetically correct Smiling at you tai

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