Tuesday, November 28, 2017

Do Not Fear Me Comments

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Do not fear me, I am with you when you say good night
I will guide you, as I do now it's the end of the day
So, be calm. Gently walk through the fading light
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Janaki Nilmini
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Dr Antony Theodore 08 February 2018

The end is dignity, do not struggle with all your might Do what's good, cleanse your mind; all the religions say So, be calm. Gentlywalk through the fading light- - - - Dylan Thomas and his poem..... you have recaptured its essence and made it your own..... lovely poem dear poetess. tony

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Janaki 08 February 2018

Thank you for your appreciation Brahminji.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 November 2017

Do what's good, cleanse your mind; all the religions say So, be calm. Gentlywalk through the fading light ....... beautiful expression with nice theme. Beautiful poem shared. Thank u dear Janaki for sharing this poem.

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Janaki 28 November 2017

Thank you Kkumarmaniji for your kind and inspirational words.

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Jazib Kamalvi 28 November 2017

A wonderfully courageous work, Janaki. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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