Do Not Hurt Angels Poem by Raymond Rivera

Do Not Hurt Angels



He couldn't have been
more than eleven years old.
As innocent as Adam
as fiesty as Eve.

Caught me smoking a cigarette
and proceeded to ask me
why I waste my time
with such filth.
Why I choose to poison my lungs.

Not wanting to deal with a child
I simply told him that I didn't care
and thought we'd go our
seperate ways.

Upon hearing my response
to his question
he glared at me as if I were a
mentally disturbed person.
As if I were sculpting
my own tomb.

Tells me,
'Not me, I'll never smoke.
I'm going to live forever.'

I just laughed
quietly to myself.

Cute kid.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brenda Arroyo 11 March 2010

This made me smile. Children are just that way. Pure and innocently lovely. I like how you put it together.

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Mariah Burns 25 February 2010

This Is Cute Great job

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Raymond Rivera

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Naguabo, Puerto Rico
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