norhan Ahmed

Do U Care - Poem by norhan Ahmed

Do u care about me?

R u afraid about me?

Do u feel by me

That is a new on me.

Afraid about me so u r hurt me, and on my heart, u made it in pain.

Or afraid about me by ur lies that make us waste times.

You said that i am nothing to you and i am aload, so u r wasting your time playing

Noone doesn't matter with you.

I am sad from my heart because ur heart is strong like the stone and ur way is harsh on me.

I had hope to change so I had been patient for what u had done in me

I am regret on the time that we spent together.

Everything has been lost.

And Everything in me was missing you and need you.

Really I am sad on everything

The problem that being near or far, in or out of my life, you are making me pain and hurt,

It isn't easy on me to not think of you or not talking to you.

Comments about Do U Care by norhan Ahmed

  • (5/12/2011 6:57:00 AM)

    Nice poem. Rich in depth and imagery.
    Beautifully conceived. I rate it 10.
    Thanks for sharing.....
    Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 12, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 12, 2011

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