Do Ya Feel Me? ? Poem by lil miss

Do Ya Feel Me? ?

Rating: 5.0


are ya catchin' what i'm throwin'?
are ya reapin' what i'm sewin'?
are ya sniffin' what i'm blowin'?
are ya smokin' what i'm growin'?
do ya feel me people?
are my rhymes alright?
do they make sense?
are they hard to recite?
'cause i usually write when i'm high as a kite
i guess it gives me wings and my brain takes flight
actually i've never ever written with a clear mind
but still my worst lines fall far from behind
far from short of the standards on here
no offence kids but come back next year
some say i'm cocky but i say i'm just confident
when they all hate me i take it as a compliment
the only thing they can say is that my vocabulary AIN'T the boss
but i don't need to use big words to get my point across
plus occasionally, i'll have a little trouble concluding
my personalities clash and they all start feuding
one wants to write more, one wants to sleep
the rest just watch in disbelief
its the same old fightin', day in, day out
sometimes i can't seem to block it out
so here i am again in that same situation
how do i finish off my latest creation?


(oh.... it happened.............)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tesla Blackburn 17 June 2009

I so agree with you. We poet's are just real! I feel you completely.

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John Lyday 16 June 2009

Kind of reminds me of when I was a teenager. Except I only wrote one poem; sent it into high times and they rejected it. Good Rhyme. Good Poem.

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Wow, Lil miss, that was tight. your rhyming skills are crazy! Have you ever considered writing for rappers? or rapping yourself? Good job.

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Catrina Heart 11 June 2009

Oh! great internal and end rhymes crafted too with fine diction............Thanks.......10

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