Do You Know Poem by Lance K...

Do You Know



Do you know
a match can burn
a mind can learn
a gun can kill
a touch can feel
an eye can die
beauty can fly
do you know
a heart can ache
that friends can break
a guy can take
or act real fake
a man can hurt
a flower grow from dirt?
Do you know
that match burned
my mind and turned
the gun to kill
how I feel
now my eye
can't see beauty fly
now my heart aches
where my friends can't break
cause a guy went to take
while he was acting all fake
and went and hurt
where I felt like dirt
do you know
he took you
which hurt me too
cause the beauty I loved and knew
was you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Callie Carroll 28 March 2009

This is quite interesting and takes a surprising turn. You have a way with rhyme and meter. I will be interested in seeing the final version.

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