Do You Remember? Comments

It's a pretty poem, but never ask a lot of questions. Please use the English way of writing a poem and not as in Arabic. Good luck.

Oh Really great poem. I liked it. شكرا عالمشاركة من أجمل القصائد التي قرأتها ننتظر المزيد: -)

Oh Really great poem. I liked it. شكرا عالمشاركة من أجمل القصائد التي قرأتها ننتظر المزيد: -)

If you fight for it together hand in hand you two will get there. True love conquers all. I can attest to that. I have the deepest pure true love for my lady as she does for me and I know that true love makes it through. Work together and you will overcome and win. Again beautiful poem.

A beautiful poem and deep expression of love. I have this same situation in my life. I love my lady so much and when I talk to her again we'll figure it out together. So maybe if you talked about it together and came up with solutions together things would go better and easier. A wonderful expression here. I know when I talk to my lady again I'll make sure to prove all those promises to her and working together on solutions is the best way. A 10. Wonderful piece.