~~~do You Remember The Time~~~ Comments

A reckless sea trapped in absolution What a beautiful line this is. The whole poem sings along delightfully Tom Billsborough

Opening my heart Honey, break it apart Arms intertwined.. a good poem romantic. past memories....love and its varied forms....... so many thoughts came into my mind as i read your poem. tony

What I really (really) like about this piece is that you don't sacrifice your message for your rhyme scheme (i.e. absolution, exposed) . All to often people get so caught up in trying to make the next line rhyme that they step away from the point they were trying to make. You show courage in the piece twofold. Firstly in speaking your thought, but secondly in not surrendering that same message simply to make the poem rhyme. Well written. Thanks for sharing