Does She Really Care? Poem by Bradley Lester

Does She Really Care?

Rating: 5.0


Does she really care, the way she says she does
Or are these words, to make me feel alright
I need to really know, if this in fact is true
A misbelief perhaps, a burden in my plight

If what she says is true, I cannot feel the vibe
She never seems to write, or contact me as such
So do I carry on, believing her each day
Cos I could go somewhere, my love for her's too much

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lady Grace 09 June 2009

the title shows doubts and confusions...well penned..grace

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Sameer Ahmed 06 June 2009

A need for clarification is purely deserved in this poem to desquamate the skin of doubts, uncertainity and qualm...10/10

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Bradley Lester

Bradley Lester

Western Cape, Cape Town
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