Don'T Cry Poem by Asia Robinson
Don'T Cry
I wish to write a story about my sad friend
Her life came to an end on a saturday night
She whispered softly in mye ear and told me Don't cry
I couldn't hold the tears that builded up in my eyes
They fell the very night that i heard she died
All i could hear was those words she spoke to me
Don't Cry
Neat poem, but the past tense of build is built, not builded. The rest of the poem is so nice that it is jarring to see that mistake (?) .
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 3:33:11 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Indeed a sad story but I agree with Fred you got your tenses a little mixed. You may think me very critical I am but only if I think thata talent needs fostering ivor Aka poeticpiers