Thursday, May 17, 2007

Don'T Cry Old Room Don'T Cry! Comments

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The room is ashamed
of its nakedness

stripped down
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Dónall Dempsey
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Gina Pisapia 14 July 2007

Can haiku have titles? And if so what a whooper this is and what a red herring.. but that's part of the fun of it. It states one ordinary thing and yet ressonates with two meanings. I always liked salad and I love haiku and here is a haiku I could eat. Yum yum...wot fun! Is the naked one in the poem you or your loved one...as that changes how one sees it! This dressing cuts both ways. The olive oil of it is smoothly sensuous and the cider vinegar gives it a refreshing bite. You have too much stuff on at once(I'm referring to the site now) and I have to take a different strategy each time of viewing you. First I did all the A's(phew) then picked a favourite number(7) and now I'm doing haiku! You should have just drip fed us one by one by one by...someday oneday I will get through all of you. It will be a labour of love 'cos I love your words! It's just there are so many!

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