Done My Best And Tried So Hard Poem by ethan cox

Done My Best And Tried So Hard

Rating: 5.0


Just because I don't know
What I want to be
Shouldn't give you the right
To criticize me

I've done my best
And tried so hard
Just cause I don't know yet
Doesn't mean it's off to far

That shouldn't be
A reason to leave
Please don't go
I want you to believe

Help me out
Don't bring me down
I want you to be true
Not fake like a clown

Don't hurt me again
Been through to much
Don't want to deal with
Your lies and such

I know what I want to be
I want to be a writer
Or risk my life
And be a great fighter

There's to much to pick from
And not enough time
But please just promise me
You'll always be mine

Monday, April 28, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: fighter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

hey wow this poem shoes allot of emotion but it was so good... sad but good dont ever stop.

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Pandora Chaos 29 April 2008

WOW! ! ! ! ! I liked this alot. It was kinda sad to me but i like sad poems. I give it a 10/10. ttfn

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