Sunday, February 4, 2018

Donkey Days Comments

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DONKEY DAYS ON THE BEACH


Donkey-man, donkey-man, where shall be go?
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Robert Tomlinson
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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 February 2018

An amazing poem! A great rhythm and rhyme...My favorite lines: Left-right, left-right, then faster. Donkey feet trot, front-right, back-left.......Thanks for sharing...10

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Robert Tomlinson 05 February 2018

Thanks for taking the trouble Jazib. Means such a lot on my first posting. Much more to come. I check your work out in the morning. Cheers, Bob T.

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Jazib Kamalvi 05 February 2018

A fine start with a nice poem, Bob. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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