Saturday, September 5, 2020

Dormant Humanity Comments

Rating: 5.0

O these eyes no longer glisten in the darkness.
O these eyes can no longer perceive the Truth.
O these eyes are unable to decipher the
Writing on the wall like noble, righteous Daniel.
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Dominic Windram 09 September 2020

Thanks Shaun...the way things are at the moment it would probably take a nuclear war or a massive environmental catastrophe (probably on its way) for people to WAKE Up and actually smell the coffee to coin a phrase.

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Shaun Cronick 05 September 2020

Who indeed except ourselves. But what is the catalyst for that to happen and then we all can see with better eyes. A fine poem Dominic to make one think, if one chooses to. And that's the rub. A full score and well deserved too. Take care and I wish you well.

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